MONKAY #1 "The Begining" Could Be Better
I like the idea, but the execution needs work. There is far too much exposition from the characters and not enough storyline. Not that this idea requires storyline, but static bearheads spouting out speech bubbles isn't going to win you friends. What you need to do, then, is to storyboard the next episode to coherently tell the story. The action was neat, but there needed to be more of it. Otherwise, a neat attempt, but more effort could truly make this neater.