Doust19's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[MONKAY #1 "The Begining"]

Could Be Better

I like the idea, but the execution needs work. There is far too much exposition from the characters and not enough storyline. Not that this idea requires storyline, but static bearheads spouting out speech bubbles isn't going to win you friends. What you need to do, then, is to storyboard the next episode to coherently tell the story. The action was neat, but there needed to be more of it. Otherwise, a neat attempt, but more effort could truly make this neater.

ZIM106 responds:

Well i really haven't got into the stroy yet in this episode... just introduced the characters... well most of them, but thanks for the good advice... it might be helpful in the near future.

[Lei's Quest Ep 1 Ver. 2]

Pretty damn good.

I actually liked it. :D There were some points that the seams of the flash seemed to stick out (but who am I to say that?) but there were also points that seemed just freakin' cool.

By the way, why does everyone seem to hate you? What's with these 'jokes' you keep defending yourself for?

DAIRYDOG responds:

I made some fake hentai games with jokes towards hentai. All the people who searched for "Hentai" with no sense of humor then proceded to curse me out.